Describing a person.

I've chosen a couple of your emails so you can have them as a model for any future writings. Notice how you classmates:

- distribute their ideas into balanced paragraphs, not in isolated sentences.
- make use of connectors to smoothly link sentences, so they don't look so simple but, at the same time, not too long!
- include the vocabulary we have seen in class and avoid writing about things which are way too complicated for you and only make you make mistakes!
- use different structures and tenses (as Jose Antonio does).

I've chosen these three but I could have chosen some others, too. Many of you have done a great job!

Hope you find it useful.

Here you have also the sheet with the common mistakes.